Uttaran
movie tells the story of the Indian drama, the plot is too complicated
example, Tapasya replace Icha on her wedding day, so Veer's wife, at the
time he divorced. Then have a child from Rathore. After realizing his confusion, Tappu willingly married to Tej Singh, one family member Veer.
In later canceled on the day Icha married with Veer, married to Vansh (brother Veer). Vansh meniggal, then married again with Veer.film this Indian drama
can not play a lot of feelings and the logic of conflict in this drama. Icha eventually married Vans, brother Veer who also fell in love with her. Even if his mother Veer, very annoyed with the two sons that crazy about a girl named Icha, he was forced to approve. Tapasya is not achieved love Veer, agree to a divorce, with the intention of making hidupa Icha-Veer suffer. But others say life plan. In short, Vans later shot by Tapasya, and eventually died. Veer with Icha instead be united in marriage. Despite having a boy named Yuvraj, his mother still did not receive the actual Veer Icha as his son's. he always tried to separate the two. finally, Veer lost some memory. Veer knowing his wife was named Icha, but forgot her figure. It occurs when the new Icha gave birth to her second child, named Methi. And
disaster received by icha come, Icha should go to jail for being
accused of killing a wanita.Padahal only to save the life of a boy named
Kanha. This causes Icha separated from her husband and children for a dozen years. at the time, also has spawned Tapasya Mukta, daughter with Raghuvendra Pratap Rathore (who were in prison). he willingly chose to leave her daughter with her parents, Jogi and Divya. and left his family for a dozen years, with a sense of hatred.
i think in your writing you have a missing word, you may pay attention in your next writing.
BalasHapusi think that's wonderful writing but perhaps you must check your writing because i can't seethe pharagraph, thankyouuu
BalasHapusDear Idul, I Hope you don't mind if I corrected your mistakes :
BalasHapus1. Tapasya replace Icha on her wedding day, so Veer's wife, at the time he divorce --> to be honest I don't understand these Sentences, maybe it's better if you write " Tapasya replaces Icha on her wedding day, so Veer divorces his wife."
2. In later canceled on the day Icha married with Veer, married to Vansh (brother Veer) --> maybe it would be better if u write " later after canceled her wedding with veer, she marry Vans.
3.film this Indian drama can not play a lot of feelings and the logic of conflict in this drama. --> I don't get your point in these sentences maybe you mean "The conflict in this Indian serial does not make sense and I did not get any feel."
in your writing have mistakes
BalasHapus“Vansh meniggal” should be “Vansh die”
“agree to a divorce, with the intention of making hidupa Icha-Veer suffer” should be “agree to a divorce, with the intention of making them life”
“Icha should go to jail for being accused of killing a wanita” it should be “Icha should go to jail for being accused of killing a woman”
“Padahal only to save the life of a boy named Kanha” it should be “Actually only to save the life from a boy, his named is Kanha.
thank you
your writing is good but in another time you have to check out your writing before your upload because if get same mistake you can change it.
BalasHapus