Senin, 04 April 2016

COMMENT




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My Bad Experiences about Uttaran

I think Uttaran serial is quite good but I had a bad experiences about it. so, I am used to watch a football match in the evening but after Uttaran is being broadcasted on ANTV I don't have chance to watch a football match anymore because my mom is always stay tuned on TV and she doesn't let me to change the channel.
one day, I was tired waiting for my mom wishing she will let me watch my favorite channel but she didn't. So, I decided to went out and keep my self busy, hoping after came home I can take a relax and enjoy my time to watch. unfortunately, my mom already sit there with a remote control on her hand and once again she was watching Uttaran. Then, I sat beside her, I thought she will stop watching because it was 5:30 p.m and time for her to cook. A few minutes later she is going and tell my little brother to record a video of Uttaran because she doesn't want to miss any episodes. It means I still have not a change to watch.
            The next day at 8 pm it was the day when my favorite channel is being broadcasted. unfortunately, ANTV also presented "1001 Malam" and all the main characters of Uttaran was there! obviously my mom didn't want to miss it. I was angry and I greatly amazed why did my mom love Uttaran so much.
I think Uttaran is like a magic that made house-wife aslike my mom loves Uttaran so much and I am sure most of the reasons that caused them like Uttaran is Veer. He is one of the main characters there. They said he is a cool man.


AIDUL / N1A514149
    Dear afrizal, I hope you don’t mind if I corrected your mistakes :
1. Your writing is very nice but you are a beginner you should practice writing and must look carefully your writing.
2. Supposedly the beginning of each paragraph should be written with a capital letter example"one day”, I was tired of waiting for my mom wishing she will let me watch my favorite channel but she did not . it should be " One day, I was tired of waiting for my mom wishing she will let me watch my favorite channel but she did not” .


Minggu, 27 Maret 2016

AIDUL /N1A514149 Creative Writing

     Uttaran movie tells the story of the Indian drama, the plot is too complicated example, Tapasya replace Icha on her wedding day, so Veer's wife, at the time he divorced. Then have a child from Rathore. After realizing his confusion, Tappu willingly married to Tej Singh, one family member Veer.
 
In later canceled on the day Icha married with Veer, married to Vansh (brother Veer). Vansh meniggal, then married again with Veer.film this Indian drama can not play a lot of feelings and the logic of conflict in this drama.     Icha eventually married Vans, brother Veer who also fell in love with her. Even if his mother Veer, very annoyed with the two sons that crazy about a girl named Icha, he was forced to approve. Tapasya is not achieved love Veer, agree to a divorce, with the intention of making hidupa Icha-Veer suffer.    But others say life plan. In short, Vans later shot by Tapasya, and eventually died. Veer with Icha instead be united in marriage. Despite having a boy named Yuvraj, his mother still did not receive the actual Veer Icha as his son's. he always tried to separate the two. finally, Veer lost some memory.    Veer knowing his wife was named Icha, but forgot her figure. It occurs when the new Icha gave birth to her second child, named Methi. And disaster received by icha come, Icha should go to jail for being accused of killing a wanita.Padahal only to save the life of a boy named Kanha. This causes Icha separated from her husband and children for a dozen years.    at the time, also has spawned Tapasya Mukta, daughter with Raghuvendra Pratap Rathore (who were in prison). he willingly chose to leave her daughter with her parents, Jogi and Divya. and left his family for a dozen years, with a sense of hatred.

Rabu, 23 Maret 2016

My Assignment

INI TALK SHOW NET TV

     A talk show hosted by a phenomenal artist, Sule as host and host Andrea is also pretty funny when hosts "The talk". I also really admire this event because it is different from other talk show on television. Here are prohibited from bullying and Ujang into referee. Prriiiitttt ...the sound of the whistle was sounded when there is a speaker or presenter is bullying. Do not forget, they are bullying obligated to pay five thousand that will be the accumulation of money raised will be donated.
     In addition, the show "It's Talk Show" also preserve traditional foods and beverages that Sunda by singing songs. Usually Mang Saswi that guides the singing when provided with food such as corn on the cob, salad, bandrek, donuts, bajigur, and so forth.
     Very proud because most of the food served at "This Talkshow" is rarely seen in the market. Hopefully by chanting songs of traditional food and drink can help preserve it. Incidentally most of the guests were women, but there is a man I admire a comedian whose name is Wendy soared from where Parto Cagur.di comedy group that acts as security on the Sule, intending to make into Wendy. when Wendy stood up to move seat, Parto instead dragged the chair where Wendy will sit. Be Wendi fell out of his seat. then, the audience was laughing and Wendy was acting like mad and Parto even smile.

     I have a story that is almost the same as in high school, of expensed. my uncle was playing in the classroom. They romp and until then the natural wish to sit in a chair. ardiman knowing that nature wants to sit down, directly joking with shifting of seats to be occupied alam. when it, even nature fell off the chair. Natural pain and anger. Very ill. When nature limped and we all laugh in the classroom. When my mama told me about natural events and ardiman, my mother warned me not to joke with the shifting of seats to be occupied by someone else.